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Title: Contained Chapter Two View count: 453 Rating: 5.0 (12 ratings) Description: As I strolled along the paved sidewalk, and caught sight of that pin-straight blonde hair. I made an attempt to fasten my pace but in result tripped over my own flip flops. "Well, well, well...." Haley rolled her eyes as if she had nothing else better to do than torture me. "I'm glad you found another way to occupy yourself this summer, Becca. Tripping is it?" I got up, wiping the blood trickling down my legs. She went on and on about how she was the better person for Evan. I doubt that, the way she always thought she needed to lose a few pounds. Haley was a beautiful girl, and still is.. she just.. flushed her old self away along with last night's dinner. She chuckled at me and walked away. I grimaced from the stinging pain in my elbows and knees. I should note never to try to run away from her in flip flops. I started walking again, gazing out into the ocean's horizon. It was simply beautiful. I knew I was close to the dock because I can taste the salt on my tongue, and it suddenly got windier. The sun was just above me, beaming with delight. I could here the flock of seagulls swarming the beaches. Ready to pounce at any second for a peice of bread. Haha now i see, Haley was just like a seagull. Always keeping her eye open for any new prey. I take my time going down the wooden steps.. one by one, creeking along the way. I push some of my hair behind my ear and look up to find Evan with a fishing rod in his hand, staring at me with hope beaming in his eyes. Wow, he's such an asshole. Actually thinking I might give him another chance. For me 2nd chances only come when I feel they deserve them. In this situation Evan deserves Haley's ability to make everyone walk by her purse their lips in disgust. Evan's perfect features, the way he stands a little bit to the left, and how I just feel like melting in his arms when they were wrapped around me for the longest time made me think I'm in heaven. But im not in heaven anymore. I'm in Hell. A hell where I'm the only angel left. -- I would love some constructive cristicism xD or some thoughts please... so I can know what to change for the next chapter :) (theres prolly over.. 30? chapters in this) AND! About Do you want to play a game.. I'll try to get that done by friday.. no promises though. & last thing, gold digger video.. prolly be up next weekend xD but these chapters I can do basically everyday :) so dont be suprised if I get to chapter 10 by next weekend. Tags: doyouheartwaffles, Author: DoYouHeartWaffles |
